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... Yes, yes he is. 
For my my friend
. This is your late gift so Merry Christmas! 
These are her OCs Karla and Evan. Ack I definitely need improvement with drawing backgrounds. I still hate the paper I used, so f**king much. I MISS STRATHMORE!!!!
F**k my camera!!! I need a scanner!
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Mechanical pencil
Prismacolor Premier
Prismacolour Verithin
Faber Castell PITT drawing pens
Signo uniball white pen
On Canson sketch pad paper 9"x12"
PS Elements 7 for image adjustments
For my my friend
. This is your late gift so Merry Christmas! These are her OCs Karla and Evan. Ack I definitely need improvement with drawing backgrounds. I still hate the paper I used, so f**king much. I MISS STRATHMORE!!!!
F**k my camera!!! I need a scanner!
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Mechanical pencil
Prismacolor Premier
Prismacolour Verithin
Faber Castell PITT drawing pens
Signo uniball white pen
On Canson sketch pad paper 9"x12"
PS Elements 7 for image adjustments
Image size
2392x2915px 1.02 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-S930
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/2.9
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 31, 2010, 11:05:21 AM
© 2010 - 2024 jacobsmacob
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If you want critique, I noticed that the horizontal lines aren't going to the same vanishing point as those of the ceiling and the rail, and it'd make the perspective more believable if they were. Also, I usually advise against cutting characters off at the knees for more compositional success in pictures like this.
I feel like the guy's pose could be stronger; for instance, maybe have his legs spaced further apart so it looks more like he's walking, and placing his right hand on the rail (or even showing a foreshortened elbow with the hand in his pocket) would let the viewers know that his right arm actually exists. The same could be said for the girl's left hand. Finally, as far as coloring huge amounts of background, I'd start off with the lightest pencil strokes covering the greatest area, then bear down harder for small, shaded areas.
Other than that, I don't see any glaring anatomical issues, and I like the girl's facial expression!
Hope this helps!!
I feel like the guy's pose could be stronger; for instance, maybe have his legs spaced further apart so it looks more like he's walking, and placing his right hand on the rail (or even showing a foreshortened elbow with the hand in his pocket) would let the viewers know that his right arm actually exists. The same could be said for the girl's left hand. Finally, as far as coloring huge amounts of background, I'd start off with the lightest pencil strokes covering the greatest area, then bear down harder for small, shaded areas.
Other than that, I don't see any glaring anatomical issues, and I like the girl's facial expression!
Hope this helps!!